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A Petal Among Thorns - Final v5.1.0 with Bonus Scene


Hey fans, 

It's come to my attention that there was a misunderstanding with some of the content in A Petal Among Thorns. Petal was always meant to be portrayed as a mature young woman. This is obvious by the way she speaks and her physical features such has her large bust and full hips. 

With the age-play variable, I never meant for her to be below the age of sixteen in fantasy but canonically she's always been eighteen. I tried to alter the code to make sure she couldn't be portrayed as younger than sixteen, but unfortunately I couldn't figure it out. Since I figured we were all adults and could enjoy the game however we damn well please, I decided to leave it alone and let the player decide to make it whatever they wanted. 

This is a fantasy game which means there are no real people involved in any capacity except for me writing the scripts and rendering the images. People have the capacity to differentiate fantasy from reality. We've been doing it for thousands of years as storytelling has been an important part of society since cavemen started drawing art on walls. 

What baffles me is that we're fine with games that have you killing police officers by the hundreds, such as in Grand Theft Auto, but depicting consensual sex with a seventeen year old in a fantasy where no real people are involved makes people lose their minds. 

I don't condone sexual interactions with young persons. Sex is innately an extreme act. There's a vulnerability aspect, tons of chemicals flood the brain, there is a power dynamic, it can be confusing and scary. It's a profoundly intense experience at any age. While a young person is still developing, this can be shaping, defining, and even traumatizing. I don't condone it.

Natural selection bred men that favor young, healthy, and fertile females. The men that bed a healthy young female tended to be the ones whose lineage continued because they would more likely have healthy offspring. Our desire for a sexually mature yet still young woman is not something that just went away when we, as a society, decided it was best to experience sex at a more mature age. Even if I'm wrong on this point, my point holds. It's better to have a healthy outlet in fantasy to reduce the build up of sexual frustration that can lead to unhealthy real world behaviors.

Fantasy is the best possible solution. We men can still enjoy young women without having to involve any real persons. It seems obvious to me that if we can enjoy slaughtering thousands of people in video games without taking to the streets armed to the teeth, we should also be able to indulge in sexual fetishes and kinks that may also be inappropriate in real life. 

This is not a commonly held opinion, and I have been aggressively shamed for it. I'm a small fish in a pond full of sharks and whales. My opinion doesn't matter when it comes to business. While I don't agree with censorship, I'm not willing to die on this hill. 

I've added in a bonus scene to A Petal Among Thorns that takes place after the last sex scene. It's not terribly long, but it is a nice addition. I've removed the age play mechanic and any references to school that I found. Petal is eighteen, she's decided to forgo college for a few months after High School, and starting in A Moment of Bliss she'll be taking two classes in college. 

I know this isn't going to be a popular decision. I don't have the capabilities to fight the system, and I certainly could be wrong in my opinion. For now, I'm rolling over and letting the big dogs win the fight so they don't utterly rip me to shreds. I'm trying to build something here, but I can't if I'm fighting a war that isn't winnable. 

I adore all of my fans. I'm going to do everything I can to make my stories as incredible as I can. 

For everyone on itch.io, I'm lowering the price back down to $2.99 for one week. I'm not exactly sure how itch.io operates, but I hope this quells any issues for people who purchased the novel for $2.99 prior to its increase to full price. 

Thank you for all your support and kindness. 

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Just wanted to say that I enjoyed your game very much. I read about your Steam rejection too and that's also much bullshit. I purchased this at full price on here and didn't regret it. I think you did a great job. Looking forward to A Moment In Bliss! Thank you!

What happened with Steam was terrible. I desperately wish it didn't happen. I'm working hard to meet their undefined standards with A Moment of Bliss. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed A Petal Among Thorns. A Moment of Bliss is shaping up to be real special. I'm excited to get the first chapter out. Thank you for your support, Wafflemonsta. 

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Lovely game! Says more about the haters if they are raging about something that can be ignored or changed. Keep at it, I'm excited for what's next!

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Dude this game is amazing! I played once before but it wasn't completed and I said that I definitely will play again. Totally great. The ambient music really tugs your heart strings along with the story line. I love the dynamic of the MC and Petal. And I really relate at how sometimes you just need someone to push you when things get hard and how at times when we're down, even the slightest compliment or encouragement can just pick us back up. Looking forward to more of this.  Keep up the amazing work!

Would love to know when "A Moment of Bliss" will be coming out. No rush though, just really looking forward to it!

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Hey, Jester_fox! I appreciate the praise, it really helps keep me going. I worked hard to put some positive messages and good vibes in APAT. I'm happy to hear it paid off. A Moment of Bliss's first chapter will be available around late April or early May. It's going to be a bit different. A lot more going on, more girls to fall in love with, and the story is going to open up. I'm also introducing some new mechanics to the game to add some interactivity. Thank you for your praise and support. 

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All I have to say is WOW! Let the haters hate, what you have here is GREAT!

A truly captivating story!  I agree with your philosophy but sadly the "think police" control the mechanisms and venues that artists much like yourself need and depend upon to further fund your vision and dreams....

Thank you for pushing through and bringing Petal to a pause, I look forward to seeing where your story goes from here!

Thank you brother for the great story, you know it is memorable when your story invokes an emotional response from the readers.

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That is high praise, Anony. I appreciate it! Censorship is holding me back from exploring some facets, and may reshape the way I tell stories in the future. The overall tone and message I'm trying to capture with my works won't be impacted though. I like to write wholesome, romantic comedies wrapped in a taboo package. I might just have to taper back on the taboo part. It sucks, and it isn't right, but I don't want to be trampled under the righteous hooves of crusading megacorps. I'll do my absolute best to still bring exciting works while submitting to the beast. It's all I can do. Thank you for your support, Anony.

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It's a sad day when a work of art gets censored by the few people who do not understand it, glad I was able to get your game and pay full price when I did. 

Can not wait for your next VN as you make them worth the wait.

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Thank you, Uagain. I am woefully unequipped to fight against censorship right now. One day we might be able to push back. Until then, I'm just going to do the best I can with what they allow me to make. I appreciate your support.

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my friend, the one thing I think that might quell some issues is to remove the choose your age and choose the relationship options.  Really, they add nothing to your already great game.  He is her step-father…and same for the sisters.  He came into their lives when they were young.  They all are now unquestionably over 18.  With all that nothing should hurt reasonable persons‘ sensibilities.

This work is too good to suffer from unintentional story issues.  So looking forward to your follow on works.  SK.

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The irony is just by looking at the hentai games available on steam we can make the same argument about dozens of them, that they used here!

Some games even having forced sex, which is  rape, as a theme ffs.🙄Damn, steam censorship sure has double standards.

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I love your work! be strong and keep up the amazing work!

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      Really, those people are messed up... for me, the person who can't differ pixels from reality is the real problem here.
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Yeah, if you can't discern reality from fantasy, porn is the least of your problems. 

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In a genre replete with "These girls are all over 18 honest never mind that the MC is still at school and thus clearly under 18 and they are expressly described as younger than the MC" people should be wary about raising the question of what does and does not count as definitive proof of age. 

I never once thought Petal was under age. Nothing she does, nor says suggests it, her behaviour is very much that of an adult.

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It is unfortunate that we live in an age where "perceptions" are so widely skewed. I still can not understand how an "adult" can see one thing as perfectly normal and the other as wrong. To me it is a double standard. Unfortunately, you are forced to play by the rules that people much more powerful than you and I are, set. To keep doing the great work you do and earn a living from it, you will have to play by those rules. Having said that, do not let this setback stop your creativity and vision for the stories you write. I can tell you that those tiny changes will not even be noticed. Anyone beyond that who thinks otherwise, needs to look at themselves in a mirror and ask themselves who the "real" problem is.

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I can see your point of view and understand just wanting to be left alone to make your game in peace. I think it's BS that you were forced into it but that's the messed up world we live in. You won't get any complaints from me. Well I'm off to watch some videos of real life decapitations on the internet, at least it's of adults though ;)

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I'm with ya 100%, and I can understand why you do what you need to do, I even agree with your opinions. Like you said though, it's a matter of doing what you need to to survive in this shit-show run by those who have double-standards as their calling cards. If you were creating a game with blazing guns, and bleeding bodies all over the place, they wouldn't say squat, but this...and trying to make a living off of it?! If they can't be open about their...well, never mind that...it's stories like yours' and others that have me realizing that when I do make mine, well, I have my plans, and I was never planning on certain things, but I am definitely not planning to make money off of it through any of the places like Patreon. I will use it to support people, but that's it...and only until more of the people I follow switch to Subscribestar....